delicatale: (McDanno needing to calm down)
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My coda for the S2 premiere! I have ~all the feelings about it. Read through by my wonderful [livejournal.com profile] stjarna1984 and [livejournal.com profile] theellibu.



Exhaustion is burning Danny's eyes. He's running on empty, weary to the bones from the events of the past week, too many thoughts and too much shit piling up on top of all of them, too many unresolved fights and unexplained mysteries.

It's not until he parks the Camaro in front of Steve's house that he lets the tiredness take control. He went for groceries after dropping Steve off, knowing the man would probably strip naked and run to splash in the ocean, even with that godawful stomach wound and all the possibilities for infection - it's a wonder Max managed to clean him up well enough to prevent that before.

So Danny expects Steve to be outside, if not in the water at least watching it, making up for lost time. He doesn't expect Steve to be passed out on his couch, on his stomach no less - not a good idea with this wound, but this is Steve, Steve on painkillers. Nothing surprises Danny any more.

Danny pads through the house quietly after taking his shoes off in the doorway, and leaves the groceries in the kitchen before moving back to the living room. He sits in the armchair for a moment, elbows on his knees as he looks at Steve, his face relaxed, the frown lines still evident on his features. Danny wants to reach out and smooth them out, knowing more than one have been caused by Danny himself.

Danny, Danny just feels a fool. He let himself get wrapped up in this thing with Rachel, and yet, he stayed. He stayed for Steve.

Sighing, Danny stands up, hovering above Steve for a moment before lowering himself on top of him, careful to tuck himself in Steve's good side, not willing to put more pressure on Steve's wound. For once thankful to be smaller than Steve, Danny rests on his side on top of Steve, using him as a mattress, wedged between Steve and the back of the couch. Steve stirs, a hand flailing off the side of the sofa.

"Mrrf, wha' you doin'?"

"Taking a nap."

"Did you sleep at all last week?"

Steve’s voice is low, a rumble that Danny feels all the way through his chest. He lets his hand drop to Steve’s back, feeling his warmth, allowing it to make Danny feel more alive. He closes his eyes, finding himself nuzzling the back of Steve’s neck, and Steve merely leans into the touch, until Danny’s nose is pressed into the hairs at the nape of his neck.

“I slept.”

“Liar.”

“Well I can sleep now.” The words are loaded but they fit for Danny, they ring true in the hollow of his chest and they feel right, wrapped around Steve’s warmth. “Am I hurting you?”

“No. Don’t move.” And those words are loaded, too, uttered in a whisper and Danny closes his eyes, leaves his hand on Steve’s back, thumb brushing back and forth against the cotton of his shirt. His eyes droop closed as his heartbeat falls in sync with Steve’s breathing.

“Okay.”
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Date: 2011-09-20 11:31 am (UTC)
somehowunbroken: (5-0 Steve/Danny sky)
From: [personal profile] somehowunbroken
Ohhhh ♥

Date: 2011-09-20 11:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
why are you not in bed, you

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Date: 2011-09-20 11:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quadratur.livejournal.com
Awwww. Oh boys.....

Date: 2011-09-20 11:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
They're a little broken but they'll get better!

Date: 2011-09-20 11:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eumelia.livejournal.com
<3_<3

That's all I have to say.

Date: 2011-09-20 11:46 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-09-20 11:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] evening-spirit.livejournal.com
*sigh* beautiful. :)

Date: 2011-09-20 11:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
thank you ♥

Date: 2011-09-20 11:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doc-3.livejournal.com
Oh, my heart. Perfect.

Date: 2011-09-20 12:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
\o/ thank you <3

Date: 2011-09-20 11:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tailoredshirt.livejournal.com
♥♥&hearts :)))))

Date: 2011-09-20 12:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
I did it lookit lookit I managed to combine! \o/

Date: 2011-09-20 11:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stellarmeadow.livejournal.com
*whimper* Lovely! Just what I needed on my way to work on 4 hours of sleep!

Date: 2011-09-20 12:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
Now, that is not enough sleep!

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Date: 2011-09-20 11:59 am (UTC)
seleneheart: (stevedanno)
From: [personal profile] seleneheart
Oh, wow, so gentle and easy. Very nice.

Date: 2011-09-20 12:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
I tried - I'm sure people will write much better, but I'm quite happy with it anyway XD.

Date: 2011-09-20 12:10 pm (UTC)
ext_70109: (H50: McDanno - touch)
From: [identity profile] stjarna1984.livejournal.com
flop-nap is the greatest phrase ever, I have decided.

*covers in hearts*

Date: 2011-09-20 12:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
I think I will use it always.

Date: 2011-09-20 12:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluegrins.livejournal.com
Aww... Poor Steve, so tired he doesn't even want to swim. And poor Danny, not sleeping for a week! Loved it :)

Date: 2011-09-20 12:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
I have a feeling once his wound is healed he'll spend a lot of time in the water...but now that Danny is around he won't get to before he's out of bandages at least!

Date: 2011-09-20 12:27 pm (UTC)
embroiderama: (H50 - Danny)
From: [personal profile] embroiderama
Oh wow, this is so beautiful and restful.

Date: 2011-09-20 12:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
♥ thank you! I really wanted to write a flop-nap, and the premiere sort of gave me the background for one...

Date: 2011-09-20 12:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theellibu.livejournal.com
Flop-nap, hee ♥ I'd quite like to flop-nap on Steve/Alex, too.

Date: 2011-09-20 01:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
I wish we could flop-nap on them always. It'd be most beautiful!

Date: 2011-09-20 01:00 pm (UTC)
ext_1453: (danno & gracie)
From: [identity profile] elandrialore.livejournal.com
Yay for naps!

Date: 2011-09-20 01:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
They're the best, seriously!

Date: 2011-09-20 01:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theeverdream.livejournal.com
Yay happy flop nap :):)

Date: 2011-09-20 01:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
Not quite happy, but getting there. I think they have a few more arguments in them before they'll be back to a state of happy content with each other, but any little step towards it is something!

Look at me, over-analyzing.

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Date: 2011-09-20 01:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gottalovev.livejournal.com
Danny did look exhausted and that's the perfect remedy. very sweet. *wishes to curl up with them*

Date: 2011-09-20 01:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
be careful with Steve's stab wound =).

Date: 2011-09-20 01:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verasteine.livejournal.com
This is so lovely.

Date: 2011-09-20 01:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
thank you!

Date: 2011-09-20 01:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iam-space.livejournal.com
I love them so much. And this. ♥

Date: 2011-09-20 01:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
i love them so much too. Would not be healthy if I cared.

Date: 2011-09-20 01:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] davierose.livejournal.com
Nice.....flop nap......mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.......

Date: 2011-09-20 01:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
I'm going to make it a trend.

Date: 2011-09-20 02:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] finduilas-clln.livejournal.com
This is me. Making whimpering sounds at this fic.

♥ ♥ ♥

Date: 2011-09-20 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
♥ don't make whimpery sounds!

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Date: 2011-09-20 02:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
So perfect. ::happy sigh::

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Date: 2011-09-20 02:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tresa-cho.livejournal.com
Oh boys! <3

Date: 2011-09-20 03:10 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-09-20 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sanguine2.livejournal.com
beautiful snuggling!

Date: 2011-09-20 03:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
Yay thank you!

Date: 2011-09-20 03:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siehn.livejournal.com
All the hearts, and all the feeelings. ♥

-snicker- I stayed up all night writing, and I have work today, and I'm going 'bleeeeehwork' but. NO REGRETS.

Date: 2011-09-20 03:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
I wrote this in an hour or so, on my way to work and in the morning while I could XD. Could only watch the episode in the morning!

Date: 2011-09-20 04:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] patchcat.livejournal.com
*quiet kitten noises* This was just lovely, and now all I wanna do is wrap the boys in a blanket and let them sleep and cuddle forever. <3

Date: 2011-09-21 08:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
They deserve all the snuggly time they can get ♥

Date: 2011-09-20 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] maab-connor.livejournal.com
*smishes this fic*

Date: 2011-09-21 08:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
*smishes you*
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