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Jun. 7th, 2011 11:31 pm
delicatale: (Danno bamf)
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Written for [livejournal.com profile] stellarmeadow while on the Tube to Hanson gig number 3, following her prompt to use Danny's tie a little differently than usual. It grew a little bigger than expected.



It should have been nice, it was supposed to be. But of course, when you're hanging out with someone like Steve McGarrett, Mister Steve Trouble-Is-My-Stalker, second name I-Am-Not-A-Coward-And-Will-Confront-It-Head-On McGarrett, even a supposedly quiet breakfast in 'the best joint of Oahu' - Steve's words - had to turn into a shoot-out.

Truth be told, it wasn't Steve's fault, he didn't start it, and he and Danny merely protected themselves when bullets started flying in their direction - aimed at a couple if guys having coffee at a nearby table.

But still. Fucking McGarrett and his propensity for attracting shit and allowing it to stick to him like glue. This wouldn't - no, wait, this would happen in Jersey, but Danny would know where to go for this not to happen.

Steve overturns the table their breakfast was laid on and both he and Danny slide behind it, and Steve looks at Danny after throwing a glance over their feeble shield.

"4 of them. Danny," Steve gives him that Look, the one that makes Danny buckle his seatbelt and send prayers to all the Gods because he's going to get shot. That's when Danny notices the blood, spreading over Steve's cargoes rapidly. "You should have enough cover if you go around the back."

But Danny's not listening anymore, on his knees next to Steve, fingers tearing at the bullet hole in Steve's pants, tearing the fabric quickly, the ripping sound echoing in his head as he sees the blood gushing from Steve's thigh.

"Oh no. Oh no oh no oh no. Not on my watch, McGarrett, no way, fuck that!"

"Danny, it's nothing - the shooters, Danny, the shooters!"

Steve grabs the back of Danny's head, knocking their foreheads together as his teeth clink harshly. Danny pushes back, his fingers leaving red, sick imprints on Steve's shirt. He looks back down at the wound and starts undoing his tie.

"No. First of all they're four I'm one, I know you're a Super SEAL and you could probably take care of all of them with one hand but I'm not, okay, I'm just a Detective, and I have a daughter, and I am not going to die over breakfast, okay, Grace will never forgive me."

As he talks, Danny finishes undoing his tie and wraps it just over the bullet wound, still sputtering blood, dripping down along Steve's leg, soaking Danny's tie thoroughly, the blue gone in a second, replaced by a crimson color that makes Danny want to puke and fuck, fuck, Danny's pretty sure that's not a major artery but he's not 100% certain, okay, he's never been that good at biology. He presses his palm to his makeshift bandage as he finally looks up at Steve, seeing him apparently fighting to open his eyes.

"Hey, hey you goof, I wasn't finished talking, don't you dare going on me!"

"No, Danno. Listening."

Steve sounds way too weak and his voice is softer than usual, his teeth gritted together.

"Okay, good. Second of all, what sort of schmuck are you to think I'll leave you to bleed to death? I know, I know, you can splint your own arm but you're not fucking Superman, okay? And between dying myself, or staying here to make sure you don't die, the choice is easy."

There is still bullets, fuck, but the sounds are outside, now, not as close as they were. Danny's fingers are trembling when he thumbs at his phone, calling for backup and an ambulance. When he's done, he drops his phone to the ground and tries not to notice the blood soaking his tie, his hands, his shirt, everything.

"Hey, Steve - Steve!"

"Huh? Wha'?"

"Grace will never forgive me if you die, too, so you're not allowed, okay? Stay with me, Steven, c'mon, tell me a story."

"Can't. Classified."

Steve has the strength to smile, it seems, and the sight is such reassurance to Danny he feels like he's going to start sobbing. He brings their foreheads together again, this time gentle, his eyes boring into Steve's heavy-lidded ones.

"Asshole."

Danny can hear the ambulance's sirens.

"You love me anyway."

He can also hear his phone ring, but he doesn't reach for it.

"It's a wonder why."

There are no more sounds of guns and bullets and glass shattering.

"Hey, Danno?"

It's like they're alone in a broken world.

"Yeah?"

Danny won't let Steve go away.

"Thank you."

Danny just won't.

"Don't mention it, babe."

Date: 2011-06-07 11:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caliecat.livejournal.com
Oooh, hurt/comfort! Sweet and lovely, intense and emotional - very nice!

Date: 2011-06-08 05:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
Heee, glad you liked it! \o/ \o/

Date: 2011-06-07 11:14 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-06-08 05:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
Lol, I never know what to reply to comments like this. I'm glad you liked it? I think you did! Hehehe XD.

Date: 2011-06-08 05:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imaginarycircus.livejournal.com
Yes, it was so sweet underneath all the shrapnel and blood! ♥

Date: 2011-06-07 11:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alba17.livejournal.com
*whimper* I hope Danny never has to use his tie for this in the show. Really good scene, I really felt right in the middle of the action.

Date: 2011-06-08 05:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
First time I watched the General Pak episode I thought he used his tie on the General's wife's wound, but then realised it was her scarf or something. I really wanted it to be his tie!

God I'm glad, I always feel so insecure about action scenes.

Date: 2011-06-08 11:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alba17.livejournal.com
insecure about action scenes. You needn't be! (I do too - *eyes unfinished fic*) I need to watch some eps again.

Date: 2011-06-08 12:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
Oooh, nice, very intense. I like it.

Date: 2011-06-08 05:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
Yay! I couldn't manage to go into deeper emotions - didn't really want to, but I think in the end it works as it is!

Date: 2011-06-08 12:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunslingaaahhh.livejournal.com
GHFDKJGHDSGKJHGSDGSDKGHLD

Date: 2011-06-08 05:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunslingaaahhh.livejournal.com
i thought id had more to say but EVIDENTLY NOT.

Date: 2011-06-08 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lasamy.livejournal.com
oooh so intense!!!! Boys ♥

Date: 2011-06-08 05:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
\o/ glad you think so! They'll be okay, they'll be okay. *pets them*

Date: 2011-06-08 10:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theellibu.livejournal.com
Aw, I love this. Very nicely done, hun ♥

Date: 2011-06-08 11:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
♥♥♥ I would have sent it to you but I wasn't finished with it until I was on the way back from the gig and then you'd have been asleeeeeep.

Date: 2011-06-08 12:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theellibu.livejournal.com
I still heard you come home, but yeah, I was just about to fall asleep. It's okay though, this was a nice thing to wake up to :)

Date: 2011-06-08 12:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
=D I'm glad you liked it, hee! The most random images come to me sometimes...The guy sitting next to me on the Tube as I was writing definitely read it as I was writing ^^.

Date: 2011-06-08 11:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stellarmeadow.livejournal.com
Eeeee!! Love, so much love! You are all kinds of wonderful for this! Thank you!! :):)

Date: 2011-06-09 05:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
=DDDD yay, glad you enjoyed it!!!

Date: 2011-06-09 08:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theeverdream.livejournal.com
"Can't. Classified."

Oh, my heart, it is filled with so much. <3

Date: 2011-06-09 08:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
I thought even on the verge of passing out because of blood loss, Steve would keep his wits to himself ^^.

Date: 2011-06-09 10:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sirona-gs.livejournal.com
Oh, Steeeeeeve! Meeeep! :') Poor Danno, too! ;_____;

Date: 2011-06-10 06:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
They'll be okay! They are in my head, anyway, it's alllllll okay, and then Steve pouts because he can't swim or run after people or drive or blow peoples up while he's recovering.

Date: 2011-06-15 10:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wyvernwolf.livejournal.com
Very intense!

I really liked how through it all Danny kept bitching away! Just so him. :) But poor Danny's going to have bad memories about his ties now. Steve'll have to make it up to him somehow when he gets better! ;-p

Date: 2011-06-15 10:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
Steve will buy him all the ties!

Date: 2011-06-15 10:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wyvernwolf.livejournal.com
If he does, maybe Danny can use them to tie Steve up in other ways!

(And thought I'd just let you know I added you as a friend.)

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