Damn, this is awesome. Also: guh, that is a seriously hot sex scene!
With regard to Brit picking, can I suggest that you change 'flat' to 'apartment'? I'm not American but I've spent quite a bit of time in the US, and apartment is definitely the more commonly used word.
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Date: 2011-04-15 12:33 pm (UTC)With regard to Brit picking, can I suggest that you change 'flat' to 'apartment'? I'm not American but I've spent quite a bit of time in the US, and apartment is definitely the more commonly used word.