Date: 2011-04-14 08:24 pm (UTC)
I like how you took the fandom norms and just flipped 'em. Like with the house, how everyone writes that Steve is uncomfortable there because of the memories and emptiness and the loneliness, but instead you made it a place for him to make his own, like a gift from his dad or his family, like the Marquis, like maybe he can start trying to move on from the pain by making some good memories in a painful place (with Danno). Also, you wrote the couple quiet and content instead of angsty or horny. xD I can see this as one of their rare Sunday mornings. Maybe Rachel likes to take Grace to church or some other obligation and this is how Steve and Danny wake up, lazy and free of burden, and they'd really just like to...enjoy each other's existence in the other's life, y/y? :) I think so.

Also, the bit with the foot, I fuckin' loved that. I can so see Steve doing that (and having the training from like some random monastery! xD) just because he loves to touch Danny and make him feel good any chance he gets. Steve feels good when Danny does. :D

Lovely, thankyouuu. ♥
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