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Title: There never will be enough words
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Danny sucks Steve's cock.
Disclaimer: Don't own them, no harm intended, no profit made etc.
Word count: 812
Author's note: [livejournal.com profile] armillarysphere has generously looked this over so if there is any errors/brit words left in, it's all my fault. Ahhh, the happy days of a new relationship with a new fandom. My Muse is on overload, I do apologize if you want me gone already. Wrote this at work, and it's short, but I really quite like it so if you give this a shot, I'll be eternally grateful. Anyway, I hope you enjoy, comments are amazing and I love them a lot.



There are a lot of things to say about Detective Danny Williams. Loud, brash, abrasive, annoying, stubborn are words that come to Steve's mind when he thinks about Detective Danny Williams. There are also a lot of other things Steve could say, none of which he could actually say in public, things that he’s only discovered recently, when this whole partnership turned into something more - late night, very badly timed sex, Steve offering Danny something to cling to as he drowned in his brother's mistakes and their consequences.

Terrible timing, but they haven't stopped since then. And Steve has discovered a whole new array of words that can be used for Danny Williams, along with a whole new array of feelings Steve's not very good at pinpointing, or describing.

He could try to explain how Danny sucks cock like he lives his life - hard and fierce and a little angry, teeth scraping along Steve's erection from time to time. Danny sucks cock with an intense focus on details, and it's like he's memorizing everything that makes Steve twitch and gasp and moan. Danny sucks cock with wet, obscene noises and the tips of his hair tickling Steve's lower stomach, tiny little points of contact on which Steve tries to focus so he doesn't just completely lose it in thirty seconds flat.

And now Steve doesn't want to try to explain anything any more. Right now he couldn't, anyway, because Danny is going for it as if his life depends on it, and it's been a long day and this is the kind of relief Steve has refused to hope for all afternoon.

Because Danny sucks cock like his mouth was created for that very purpose, tight and hot and with his tongue flattening against the underside or twisting around the tip on the upstroke, and Steve is very partial to getting his dick sucked, okay, he likes it - he likes it a lot. And it's not that he doesn't have stamina, because he does, it's just. It's Danny and he's fucking good at this and Steve is making sounds he didn't know he could make, high-pitched and muffled into the hand he shoves into his mouth, he's feeling things he's not felt in a while, squeezing his heart into shape.

And Danny doesn't let up. Just like for everything else in his life, he's just not the kind to give up. Danny's a giver, and it probably will break him someday, because he's just too much sometimes, giving too much out of a heart that’s too big to fit in his broad, compact chest. And on the days it bleeds Steve tries his best to stop the flood.

Danny gives; he gives until Steve is thrusting up into his mouth, until Steve tears the sheets by pulling on them too hard. He gives until Steve's stomach twists sharply, the tight coil of his orgasm springing free and shooting through the whole of him, making him shake and quiver, and Danny licks him through it because that's what he does, he goes to the end of things.

Steve barely has the strength in his trembling arms to hoist Danny back up, but he manages somehow, and it's so easy and it works so well when he wraps his hand around Danny's cock, and he's so, so hard, it makes Steve gasp, as if he didn't know, as if he didn't realize before that Danny does everything that he does for other people.

For Grace, for Matt, for Rachel, for Kono, for Chin, for him. Danny's behavior during sex is an exact copy of the way he lives his life, and Steve wants to know everything about it, wants to dig in, with teeth and nails and heart and he wants to discover all the right words to qualify Danny, arrange them in neat little rows in his head that Danny will be way too happy to kick and mess about with at every possible chance.

Danny only needs a few strong, tight strokes to come, driving his hips into Steve's hand, his eyes closed tight and his fingers curled around Steve's biceps, holding on so tight it hurts in the best of ways. Steve kisses him, all over his face, temple forehead cheekbone cheek chin lips jaw earlobe and back, tasting Danny's skin and sweat and the beer they had earlier and Danny's gasps and moans.

And that's that. They fall back into bed with shallow breaths and lazy kisses, Steve's got come all over his chest and he's sweaty as fuck and Danny is wrapped around him, his hair curling around his temples with sweat, and it's completely dysfunctional and perfect, absolutely fucking perfect. Even if Steve doesn't ever get to know all the words about Danny, he's here to stay and he'll try. He doesn't care if it takes him years.

Date: 2011-04-12 12:06 pm (UTC)
ext_384643: (Danno blue level)
From: [identity profile] sexycazzy.livejournal.com
That...wow! :-)

Date: 2011-04-12 12:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
I'll take the speechlessness as a good thing! \o/

Date: 2011-04-12 12:51 pm (UTC)
ext_411194: (Dannydisbelieving)
From: [identity profile] jazzybabe56.livejournal.com
OMG Why would we ever want you to stop?? Please bring on whatever you want to ramble about where it comes to these two!

that was wonderful! I want a cigarette and I don't even smoke!

:D

Date: 2011-04-12 01:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
I don't want to stop! For now, anyway :'). Been a loooong time since I've been this addicted with a tv show, it's just so, so amazing. Loving the feeling!

I'm really glad you enjoyed it =DDD. Thanks for reading!

Date: 2011-04-12 02:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com
Holy cow, that was super hot and super well-written. Awesome and I love your choice of words and how you paint such a fantastic picture. Great fic!!

Date: 2011-04-12 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
Thank you very very much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D.

Date: 2011-04-12 03:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adrianneb78239.livejournal.com
This was not only very hawt, but it was so packed with emotions. I love the parallel duality of Steve description of on how Danny lives, and how that parallel in their sex life. Good work!

Date: 2011-04-12 03:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad for this fandom, for once I tried to do something a little different and a little deeper, you get it!!! It's amazing. I love it. Thank you for reading, so very much!

Date: 2011-04-12 04:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] americandirrty.livejournal.com
Wow this is so good. I love it!

Date: 2011-04-12 04:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! =D

Date: 2011-04-12 04:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] navyvet90.livejournal.com
OMG ... so, soooo good! Amazing, even. It's scary how much I love this fandom - good to know I'm not alone. LOL.
I adore your writing and look forward to LOTS more.

Date: 2011-04-12 04:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
This fandom, this show, these men - so terribly, terribly addictive. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!!!

Date: 2011-04-12 04:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snoewhite.livejournal.com
THIS SO HARD! I think I just came a little. lol

Date: 2011-04-12 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
OMG YOUR ICON I HAVE JUST SEEN THIS I HONEST TO GOD SQUEALED AND MADE THAT FACE :3.

Date: 2011-04-12 07:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snoewhite.livejournal.com
THE FABULOUS BM_SHIPPER made that! Isn't it purdy? *pets icon*

Date: 2011-04-12 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
I KNOW I KNOW I HAVE IT TOO NOW.

Date: 2011-04-12 05:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lobster87.livejournal.com
Amazing! brilliantly written

Date: 2011-04-12 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
Thank you very very much!

Date: 2011-04-12 06:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-macbeth-13.livejournal.com
This is wonderful.

Date: 2011-04-12 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
*bows* thank you! So glad you enjoyed!

Date: 2011-04-12 06:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verob2002.livejournal.com
love it!!!

Date: 2011-04-12 06:43 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-04-12 10:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kapoosh-kapow.livejournal.com
errmmm....wow.
i'm speechless, and that never happens.
good god, woman.
by the way, loving that you wrote THAT at work. where do you work, I need me a job there!

Date: 2011-04-13 06:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
Ahahah, I'm just very skilled! And I don't have a lot to do these days. But I really need to stop :'). Although I wrote it in short bursts, under less than an hour so I guess it's ok?

Date: 2011-04-13 08:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gunslingaaahhh.livejournal.com
uh. maze. ing.

Date: 2011-04-13 08:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
*bows* very very glad you think so!

Date: 2011-04-13 08:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] michele659.livejournal.com
This was sexy and very touching at the same time. Steve thinking about the way Danny is in bed being a metaphor for the way he lives his life,and the way he gives to people.
I loved this:
Just like for everything else in his life, he's just not the kind to give up. Danny's a giver, and it probably will break him someday, because he's just too much sometimes, giving too much out of a heart that’s too big to fit in his broad, compact chest. And on the days it bleeds Steve tries his best to stop the flood.
That was beautiful,and as much a declaration of love as anything else Steve could've said(as was the last line).


Date: 2011-04-13 09:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
<3 I really loved writing it and I'm so happy people are happy reading it, honestly, it makes my heart burst. Thank you so much!

Date: 2011-04-13 03:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] and-ed.livejournal.com
Holy...just...gah. I'm speechless. I mean, it goes without saying that this was hot, but the emotion that you packed into this short piece, the parallels between sex and the rest of Danny's life...just...wow. Two bits I especially loved...

...he's feeling things he's not felt in a while, squeezing his heart into shape.

and... ...he's just too much sometimes, giving too much out of a heart that’s too big to fit in his broad, compact chest. And on the days it bleeds Steve tries his best to stop the flood.

Just beautiful. I heartily approve of how you spend your work time. =)

Date: 2011-04-13 03:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
Seriously I spend way too much time thinking about them and writing them while at work. It's terribly counter productive, but then again my schedule is not too packed these days ^^.

I'm really happy that what I wanted to convey to you guys worked. I'm not really into mechanical, bland porn, so I always try not to write it that way! I'm sure I do sometimes, but I really liked that one, thought it had something a little special...

Date: 2011-05-01 01:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] damaduende.livejournal.com
That... that was... *shakes head* I think you broke me *tries again* That was awesome, thank you oh so much for that.

Date: 2011-05-01 10:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
You are so welcome. It's still one of my favorite in the fics I've written for H50 as of yet...So every time I get a comment on it I am so happy and thrilled! Thank you so much for reading.

Date: 2011-05-14 02:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thegrrrl2002.livejournal.com
This is awesome, so hot and packed full of emotion and just absolutely delicious!

Date: 2011-05-14 03:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatale.livejournal.com
hee, thanks! I loved writing this, it's one of those I really like, there isn't that many of them!

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