You're an amazingly talented writer. I love the things you come up with, and your attention to detail really brings life to what you write. I've enjoyed pretty much everything of yours that I've read, and honestly, there's nothing I can think of off the top of my head that I'd change about any of your stories. You do an excellent job.
As for SCI Steve - I only read that first bit you sent to me and haven't seen it since, but I'll be glad to look at it again if you'd like. I thought the part you sent me was excellent. I love the way you handle Steve's emotions and his thought processes after getting injured. I've been in a place somewhat similar to the one you've placed him in - when I was 22, I went from fairly healthy to severely visually impaired pretty much overnight - so I can say with at least some accuracy that you've got the heart of it dead on.
I'm always willing to read anything through for you if you need a fresh look at it. That goes for anything from this fandom, even crossovers (I might not know the other source material, but I'm still willing to look at it from a story-structure standpoint). Please, please don't hesitate to ask me if you'd like a read-through. I'm a freelance writer, so I'm always around. :)
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Date: 2011-09-22 01:31 am (UTC)As for SCI Steve - I only read that first bit you sent to me and haven't seen it since, but I'll be glad to look at it again if you'd like. I thought the part you sent me was excellent. I love the way you handle Steve's emotions and his thought processes after getting injured. I've been in a place somewhat similar to the one you've placed him in - when I was 22, I went from fairly healthy to severely visually impaired pretty much overnight - so I can say with at least some accuracy that you've got the heart of it dead on.
I'm always willing to read anything through for you if you need a fresh look at it. That goes for anything from this fandom, even crossovers (I might not know the other source material, but I'm still willing to look at it from a story-structure standpoint). Please, please don't hesitate to ask me if you'd like a read-through. I'm a freelance writer, so I'm always around. :)