<333 oh, oh I am so in love with you and your comment right now XD. I always write (or try to) from inside my character's mind and that's why I end up with hashed sentences and long-winded ones and confusion, but if it works in the end, I'm so happy. I also wondered if I went too far in the 'I can't do this', but I really could see it happen so I just...i just went for it, all the while petting the feminist inside of me and offering her candy. That last bit was the best to write XD. Thank you so so much for reading and commenting!!!
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Date: 2011-04-05 06:45 am (UTC)I also wondered if I went too far in the 'I can't do this', but I really could see it happen so I just...i just went for it, all the while petting the feminist inside of me and offering her candy.
That last bit was the best to write XD.
Thank you so so much for reading and commenting!!!