ext_135508 ([identity profile] jesseofthenorth.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] delicatale 2011-08-06 02:51 pm (UTC)

Nice work!
Steve's chain of thought through his freak out really rang true, and I love that it's not all sunshine and roses but just fucked up and human.
Good job on staying true to the characterizations in the original fic.

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