ext_135508 ([identity profile] jesseofthenorth.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] delicatale 2011-04-30 11:34 pm (UTC)

Nicely done! Loved the gentle pace and the dialogue was great!. Made me laugh out of a couple of times when they were bickering. Nice job!
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