http://aislinnliadan.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] aislinnliadan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] delicatale 2011-04-19 09:45 pm (UTC)

Oh, this was absolutely lovely! I especially liked: Danny moves closer, wrapping his fingers around the back of Steve's neck for a moment as he looks at the iPhone screen. It's a way of saying hello without using words and Steve likes it, because Danny very rarely doesn't use his words. It's a little precious. Just beautiful. Also, He hates losing little bird soldiers when he doesn't have to. Haha, that's just so Steve! And the ending was just perfect--all lazy, indulgent, and sweet :)

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