I loved this. I like how Steve lures him out there and finally Danny gets it. But man these two, Steve, you moron, SAY SOMETHING! His way of wooing needs some work. And I loved the super hot smut at the end. You have their voices down oh so well.

The only thing I would con-crit would be using flat instead of apartment. I don't see Danny speaking that way. Other than that, delish!